24 September 2011

Saturday Snark!

Today's snark is an excerpt from my current WIP:

“Has Guardian sent someone to witness?” Jaedyn stared at the Emendati, not recognizing either of them as a miles or insigni who’d frequented the ranch in past. Carrying messages, more often than not.
Though what messages the Emendatio had for an emeritus remained far beyond Jaedyn’s grasp.

“We are venatori.” The man spoke up before Augustus could answer, which earned him a piercing glance. “I am Naethyn Ratan, my insignis is Horus. We were dispatched to escort you back to Favillu.”

“So then the answer is no.” Jaedyn nodded. “You could’ve saved some breath and just said so.”


sue laybourn said...

Now I'm curious about the rest of the story.

Rhianon Etzweiler said...

@sue laybourn - Check out the tags list, I think I've a few other excerpts from it floating around in the ether. =)

Amara Devonte said...

*gasp* Ooohhhh Jayden's story. love love LOVE :D

Marie Sexton said...

Ha! Love it!
Thanks for participating again! :-)

mountie123 said...

Hehehehehehe... great one Rhianon :-)

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